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With Kirstyn's help and the confidence I gained this time...

I scored 28 in the Writing Section, which I'm very happy about.

         - Nazila from Iran, Teacher 

Improve Your TOEFL Writing

Have you ever stared at the blank screen in front of you in a panic because you have no idea what to write?

Do you struggle with coming up with examples?

Do you want to sound academic, but you can't think of the right word to use to express your idea? 

Check out this video for some writing advice. 

With the right guidance, the more you write, the better you get.

Would you like to work with me as your writing coach?


Here's what other students had to say about working with me.

Kirstyn showed me that TOEFL can be not a big deal. You can get the score you want if you know what to do and how to do it. With her help and the new confidence that I gained, I went in and I took the test again and this time I not only managed to finish my essay, I even had extra time to edit my essay. And I scored 28 in the writing section, which I'm very happy about. 

-Nazila from Iran, Teacher

I experienced different teachers but the best one I found was Kirstyn. The good points she has are being sociable, knowledgable, and being kind to different students.

-Arya from Iran, Law Student

For the writing, Kirstyn is a very passionate writer. She gives every student feedback and from there, every student is able to target his mistakes and improve on his next writing assignments. If you want to score high on the TOEFL exam, if you're falling behind and you don't know how to start or how to practice, Kirstyn is really the right person to take with. 

-Khaled from Syria

Here's what your edits will look like: 
It's important for me that you feel supported throughout the entire writing process.
That's why we will meet together online. 
Here's how it works.
  1. Select "Purchase" and schedule a live meeting with me. You will be directed to make your payment.

  2. Email me at to schedule our first meeting. We will discuss where you are currently at in your writing process and action steps to take to improve your writing.

  3. You receive a study plan and essays to write for homework. 

  4. When you are finished with 2 essays, we meet to fix structural, grammatical or spelling errors.

  5. Once you write 2 more essays, we meet again. We repeat this process until all your essays are carefully edited so you KNOW how to take on the TOEFL Writing Section! 

Writing Plus



For the student who wants to get a detailed analysis of their writing and one-on-one support. We will focus on ONE Writing Task only. Choose Writing Task 1 or Writing Task 2.

  • evaluation of 4 essays

  • 3 one-hour live meetings with me 

  • estimated TOEFL writing score

  • detailed line by line edits

  • your most common mistakes & how to avoid them

  • next steps for better writing

  • feedback within 48 hours

  • Templates for Writing Task 1 and 2

  • 10 Example Essays for Writing Task 1 and 2

Advanced Writing Progress Tracker



For the student who wants to track their writing progress over time. With more online meetings and guidance, you have more time to implement strategies and improve your writing skills. This package includes both Writing Task 1 and 2.

  •  evaluation of 10 essays

  • 7 one-hour live meetings with me

  • estimated TOEFL writing score

  • detailed line by line edits

  • your most common mistakes & how to avoid them

  • next steps for better writing

  • feedback within 48 hours

  • Templates for TOEFL Writing Task 1 and 2 

  • 10 Example Essays for TOEFL Writing Task 1 and 2 

Please Note:
  • All payments are made in full prior to each writing evaluation or live lesson.

  • 24-hour cancelation policy: All live lessons canceled less than 24 hours before your scheduled appointment will not be refunded. 

  • There is no refund if you miss a scheduled live lesson.

Frequently Asked Questions

Question: How long will it take to receive feedback?

Answer: 24-48 hours


Question: I just selected my writing plan, scheduled my session and paid. What do I do now?

Answer: Meet me at your scheduled time. We will discuss your study plan and everything you need to know about your academic writing lessons at that time. 

Question: How do I know how to improve?

Answer: You will receive notes on what your most common grammar mistakes are, what grammar points to work on, as well as specific ways on how to improve the structure and fluency of your writing.


Question: If feedback does not meet my expectations, can I get a refund?

Answer: If you are not satisfied after our first online meeting, you can request a full refund. Refunds will not be issued after that. 


Question: I’m studying for the IELTS, not the TOEFL. Can I still send you an IELTS essay for evaluation?

Answer: Yes you can. However, you must provide the essay prompts and send them to me. For IELTS Writing Task 1, please send the graph and question along with your essay. For IELTS Writing Task 2, please send the question along with your essay. 

Question: I'm studying for the GRE/GMAT, not the TOEFL. Can I send you these essays for evaluation?

Answer: Yes you can. However, you must provide the essay prompts and send them to me.


Question: When do I send you my essay?

Answer: After our first meeting, you will know: how to write your essay, what to write your essay(s) about and the exact way to send your essay to me. Essays that are sent six months after the date of payment will NOT be accepted. 


Question: What format do I send my essay in?

Answer: TOEFL essays MUST be in the body of the email. Please DO NOT SEND ATTACHMENTS; .pdf, .doc, .docx formats will not be accepted. 


Question: Can I send other TOEFL essays I’ve already written?

Answer: No. Your essay prompts will be provided. The reason for this is because some essay questions out there are from old TOEFL tests. They are outdated. It is important you work with up to date writing questions. 


Question: Will you score my essay?

Answer: Yes. You will be given 2 scores. The first score will be on the scale of 0.0-5.0 (5.0 is excellent). This is the score that your real TOEFL human grader will give you before it is converted to a 30 point scale. The second score will be on a scale of 0-30 (30 is the perfect TOEFL writing score). 

Question: Will you correct my grammar mistakes?

Answer: Yes. Grammar mistakes will be corrected. You will be able to see both your original writing and the corrected version.

Question: Who are you and why should I trust you with my writing?

Answer: That's an excellent question. To learn more about me and my qualifications as a writing coach click here. 

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